Fishing for comments

lloyd

Hi all,

 

More of a lurker on here than a poster but I'd appreciate any comments on my bands first recorded tune:

http://soundcloud.com/random-white

 

Thanks in advance.

 

Antique_Guitars

I think its a good song and I like it.

I do think that if your aiming for quite a mainstream audience you might have to tighten up some of the guitar parts (the lead bits), and maybe work on making the vocals a bit stronger (they are good but need a bit more power behind them perhaps).

spark240

Ahhh....very Cure style sounds.....catchy tunes...liking it.

I think I would prefer the guitars a little heavier and up front in the mix.... 

viz

Enjoyed a lot.

lloyd

Cheers guys, appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment on it.

 

@Antique_Guitars ; agree on the lead bit, it's a cut and paste job of a few takes-it's also slighty off timing to how it's normally played.

@spark240 a few people have said it reminds them of the Cure...we'll take it! Agree about the guitars....it's a bit poppier than our live sound...

 

@viz cheers mate!

 

lloyd

Anyone else have any comments/suggestions?

JAYJO

Go on then i'll bite!   I really like your band. I thought/think thats a great track and i think if you keep going you will do well. 

lloyd

Cheers @JAYJO appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment

ThePrettyDamned

I like it, not my style but it seems nicely put together, and pretty catchy.  

Go forth and gig it!

lloyd

Thanks @ThePrettyDamned Gigging it and a few others tomorrow night. Can't wait to clock out for the weekend....

ThePrettyDamned

Nice one mate

lloyd

Cheers buddy