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Bairstow1Bairstow1 Frets: 6
edited May 2014 in Making Music
Hi guys, ive recently joined the forum and ive been in the Nottingham music scene for a long while now. Recently ive just made a new band called OAN. We have a lot of stuff written (and recorded (all parts by me). Just wondering as an initial recording of the song, what do you guys think?
Feedback would be much appreciated, but dont be too harsh, its not the mix im looking for feedback on (its only a rough one :P ), so any feedback on the song itself would be much appreciated :)



Cheers guys! :)
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  • GeorgieGeorgie Frets: 19
    It is not my style of music at all but it is good how the main riff is high on treble but the vocals are soft so a nice contrast. I also love the upbeat solo, simple yet catchy.

    Nice to hear an original song as most music is just covers or glorified karoke singers!!!

    :D
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  • JAYJOJAYJO Frets: 1445
    Great song, the vocals are very Jake Bugg imo (fine by me) I would have liked more vocals in the last minute of the song. Really like the song though its ace!!
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  • Bairstow1Bairstow1 Frets: 6
    Ahh thanks guys! :) i think the jake bugg thing is just a typical Nottingham thing! hahah :P 

    I usually write a bit heavier than this () but it's nice to experiment with more things! :) 
    Ive literally been messing around with about 10 different genres and seeing what i can really enjoy playing/writing! :P Getting there, but its still not perfect! :P

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  • JAYJOJAYJO Frets: 1445
    Another excellent track!!
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  • Bairstow1Bairstow1 Frets: 6
    Thanks :) all recorded in my small room with a DI box, a guitar, a mic and a hell of a lot of time spent on mixing and using pro tools/reason! :P I hope to get into a proper studio soon though! :) 
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  • spark240spark240 Frets: 1793
    Track one - Mmm...a strange genre..it definitely gets better as I listen to it....

    Track 2 - Punchy but not my style.....,

    But hey....all credit for actually writing songs ! 


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  • spark240spark240 Frets: 1793
    Sorry for the Hijack...just thought you might like this one..

    My pal wrote it years ago, I recorded it in bedroom studio on 1/2 " tape , have a beer and listen, its only 2 mins.

    Cheers. 



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  • Bairstow1Bairstow1 Frets: 6
    ahh thank god theres still some tape users in humanity! :) 
    This could end up being more your style :) i keep these all pretty private and will probably end up publishing these properly at some point :P but feel free to listen. Again with a beer... and let me know what you think :D


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  • lloydlloyd Frets: 5771
    I like it, would agree with @JAYJO about more vocals at the end/reducing the length of the tune.

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