My son's band, opinions please

blobb

Sounds ok.

guitars4you

Okay, so it is not crap/poor - It is a bit wishy washy but that can be worked on - As others have indicated it needs some dynamics, a bit of arranging and some 'life' - But that can be worked on 

But don't take that as 'end of the road' as it isn't - The basis of the band/song is fine so they can build on that - Looking forward to hearing the mk2 version